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Friday 16 October 2020

Writing :Why is it important to use our PBS CARE values?

 LI: To write an explanation using .T.E.E.L. paragraphs

This week we have been revising explanation writing. Next week is our assessment week so we did this collaborative challenge to remind ourselves what is needed when we write explanations.We were practising on how to be writing a explanation for our test. We used the acronym T.E.E.L to help us understand the structure of writing a paragraph.We were asked to make this a collaboration piece of work. We also tried


to use transitional vocab to make our writing more understanding.We made a recording of the explanations.I found out that having the acronym T.E.E.L really help us make our piece of writing more better.

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  1. Kia ora Afatia,
    I really liked to read your blog post today. I liked that you have written a learning intention and a detailed blurb as it helps to write a comment. I have also made a same blog post when I have worked with Florence and Jayden. I also liked your video as it explains your work well.
    Did you learn something new after completing this task. If yes, what was it? Next time try to preview your work first as there is a gap between a sentence. I am looking forward to read your other blogs.
    Keep up the great work!

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    1. Hi Sakshi,
      Yes I seen the gap and I will fix it. I did learn something new and that was when using the T.E.E.L acronym it really helped me a lot because I could understand it more clearly.Did this activity help you with preparing you for your assessment ?

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