For this task today we were asked to make a presentation or a screencastify and a game called poi rakau.This ia a game from the maori culture.This game is all about focus, speed, and agility. This game was was really fun when doing my google presentation about this game. Hope you guys have fun and stay safe for this new adventure in 2021.
Greeting's Afatia ,
ReplyDeleteThat's one amazing DLO that you've created. I think your DLO can help myself understand and learn how to play Poi Rakau. I would just give some feedback that can help you understand and know what to do and change on your next blog post. I think you should write more on what you did , what you liked , what you found tricky about this task , and what you found easy about this task ? I think you should also put a LI so the readers and myself can understand the LI is for this task is other wise you've done great.
What did you liked and found tricky about this task?
Thanks , Hope you have a fun and safe adventure for 2021 to.
Hi Liletina and thank you for commenting on my blogpost. Something I found tricky about this task was trying to explain the instructions in my own words because it was apart of the task to create new instruction of poi rakau in you DLO or screencastify, and the thing I liked about it was learning more about the game poi rakau.
ReplyDeleteWas was you favorite part of this task ?
Hey Afatia ,
DeleteThanks for replying and answering the questions. its great to see that we're having a conversation about your learning. Sorry but I haven't done this task yet but hopefully soon I get to finish it.
What would you change to make your blog-post better? why?
Thanks ,
Hi liletina and thank you for responding, things I would make my posty better is that if I were to put a learning intention with my blog and write I bit more in my blurb so people would know what I did,learnt, and what I enjoyed the most.
DeleteWhat would you change in your blog post to keep it high standard ?
Kia ora Afatia,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the SLJ team.
What a great explanation of the game you have created. I actually haven't played the game before but you made it really clear and easy to understand. Ka pai!
Have you played the game before?
Keep up the great work!
Charlotte
Mōrena Afatia, this is Elle from SLJ.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Poi Rakau instructions! You have done an incredible job on your slides - I really like that you’ve explained how to play the game so concisely and clearly, as well as including some effective imagery to accompany it!
Have you played this game before? If you haven’t, would you like to play it? I used to play it with my classmates when I was in school, and I can definitely agree that it is a good test of speed, agility and focus! As someone who struggles with hand-eye coordination, I used to find this game quite difficult, but it was always so much fun and I enjoyed making my friends laugh when I fumbled with the rakau! My nickname used to be “butter-fingers,” which was pretty accurate!
What was your favourite part about this activity? You have done a great job on your slides, so I can imagine you enjoy being able to use your creativity!
Well done Afatia! I hope you have a great day, and keep up the great work!
Mā te wā
Elle (SLJ)