For this week i am doing the summer learn journey and the next activity was that we were writing about your hometown. It is good to in Auckland that i can call home with my family.
Hi Afatia I really like your photo of Auckland on your blog - post. An improvement you need is that you need to write a little bit more, and have a better picture. Its because you picture is not clear.
I have also done this activity, and I also put a picture of Auckland on there as well. Also how long did you live in New Zealand?
The common theme from this activity has definitely been that Auckland is great because our family live here! And that's true for me as well. What else do you like about Auckland? Maybe you could tell me about your favourite things to eat, and places to visit? I love Indian food so you'll always find me eating Indian in some small shop. And i love to visit the many bushwalks we have here.
I hope to read more of your work! Have a great day, Lee
Hey Afatia! Your so far doing a fantastic job at the SLJ activities. I think in your blurb you could of described your hometown more. Remember to always attribute your photos that you use to give credit to the owner of the photo. What is your favourite thing about Auckland? Keep the great work up! - Florence
Hello Afatia! I can agree that I am glad to call Auckland home. I love the photo you used for this activity, it captures some amazing structures in New Zealand. Do you know any special New Zealand events? Keep it up!
Well done for completing this task. I am glad to see you getting active and finishing these Summer Learning Journey activities during these summer holidays. Did you enjoy doing this task? Why? Your hometown sure sounds amazing. Your hometown is a place to be safe in by the looks of it. I love the image too. Yes you can stay with family members just like me.
Hi Afatia
ReplyDeleteI really like your photo of Auckland on your blog - post. An improvement you need is that you need to write a little bit more, and have a better picture. Its because you picture is not clear.
I have also done this activity, and I also put a picture of Auckland on there as well. Also how long did you live in New Zealand?
Otherwise great job!
Hi Afatia, Lee here from Summer Learning Journey
ReplyDeleteThe common theme from this activity has definitely been that Auckland is great because our family live here! And that's true for me as well.
What else do you like about Auckland? Maybe you could tell me about your favourite things to eat, and places to visit?
I love Indian food so you'll always find me eating Indian in some small shop. And i love to visit the many bushwalks we have here.
I hope to read more of your work!
Have a great day,
Lee
Hey Afatia!
ReplyDeleteYour so far doing a fantastic job at the SLJ activities. I think in your blurb you could of described your hometown more. Remember to always attribute your photos that you use to give credit to the owner of the photo. What is your favourite thing about Auckland?
Keep the great work up! - Florence
Hello Afatia! I can agree that I am glad to call Auckland home. I love the photo you used for this activity, it captures some amazing structures in New Zealand. Do you know any special New Zealand events? Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteMalo E Lelei Afatia,
Well done for completing this task. I am glad to see you getting active and finishing these Summer Learning Journey activities during these summer holidays. Did you enjoy doing this task? Why? Your hometown sure sounds amazing. Your hometown is a place to be safe in by the looks of it. I love the image too. Yes you can stay with family members just like me.
NICE:)