This week we were doing the summer learning Journey and we had to do all the actives over the holidays. The first activity and what we had to do write about New Zealand and what we had to do was that we had to learn fun new fact about New Zealand that we didn't know.
Hi Afatia,
ReplyDeleteI really like your DL0 because you explained what you did. But you have some punctuation, and it also looks like you had the writing on the DLO as your blurb. I did this activity to but I also explained why those three were my favourite. Where did you get these facts from?
Otherwise Great Job!
Kia ora Afatia,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the Summer Learning Journey. The team and I are so excited to have you onboard with the programme this year. This summer, I will be reading and commenting on your blog posts.
You did a great job for this first activity of the Summer Learning Journey. I like how you formatted your answers into a DLO. Remember, when using pictures that you find on the internet, you must attribute them. To learn how to do this, head to the 'Cybersmart' tab on the SLJ website.
Next time I would like you to give me more detail and explain why each of these facts is of interest to you.
Keep up the awesome work, Afatia.
Cheers,
Sophie
Hi Afatia!
ReplyDeleteIts great to see that you are participating in the Summer Learning journey. I think you are making very positive blog post. Remember if you post photos on your blog or to the public, you should always attribute them to give credit to the person who owns the photos. How long did it take you to finish this blog post? I have also done this activity.
Keep the work up! - Florence
Hello Afatia! You have selected some great facts for this activity. It was very interested in finding new information about New Zealand that I hadn't know. I really like fact 2 you wrote, but why did those 3 specifically interest you? Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteMalo E Lelei Afatia,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this task. I am glad to see you getting active and finishing these Summer Learning Journey activities during these summer holidays. Did you enjoy doing this task? Why? Your created DLO looks amazing. You sure have read the instruction carefully. Well done for doing that.
NICE:)