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Thursday 23 July 2020

10 - 5 - 7 - 10 - 10 | Writing

 LI: To use the 5 - 7 - 10 method to write creatively.

Today for writing we used the 5 - 7 - 10 method but instead of doing the same thing we already did we changed it a bit to help us write more properly. We extended the method by having a 10 minutes planning time before we start writing the actual writing then it was the same routine 
5 - 7 - 10.Then we added another ten minutes so we could use D.R.A.F.T. This way of this method was really great especially the 10 minutes to plan because I got to brainstorm my ideas and to write words down. 
Meaning 

D - delete
R - rearrange 
A - Add
F - Fix 
T - Talk 


Sunset Climber 
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Lara‌ ‌jean‌  ‌was‌ ‌looking‌ ‌at‌ ‌the‌ ‌horizon‌ ‌sunrise.‌ ‌Lara‌ ‌jean‌  ‌was‌ ‌only‌ ‌23‌ ‌
when‌ ‌she‌ ‌wanted‌ ‌to‌ ‌see‌ ‌her‌ ‌whole‌ ‌town‌ ‌but‌ ‌to‌ ‌do‌ ‌that‌ ‌she‌ ‌would‌ ‌have‌ ‌
to‌ ‌climb‌ ‌the‌ ‌only‌ ‌mountain‌ ‌in‌ ‌her‌ ‌town.‌ ‌Lara‌ ‌jean‌  ‌was‌ ‌climbing‌ ‌since‌ ‌she‌ ‌
was‌ ‌five‌ ‌years‌ ‌old‌ ‌so‌ ‌she‌ ‌knew‌ ‌what‌ ‌she‌ ‌was‌ ‌up‌ ‌against.‌ ‌She‌ ‌had‌ ‌
everything‌ ‌pack‌ ‌she‌ ‌needed.By‌ ‌the‌ ‌time‌ ‌she‌ ‌started‌ ‌it‌ ‌was‌ ‌getting‌ ‌
colder‌ ‌and‌ ‌colder‌ ‌the‌ ‌higher‌ ‌she‌ ‌went.‌ ‌

 ‌Lucky‌ ‌she‌ ‌had‌ ‌two‌ ‌sweaters‌ ‌on‌ ‌and‌ ‌a‌ ‌jacket.Her‌ ‌muscles‌ ‌strength‌ ‌
were‌ ‌tiring‌ ‌out‌ ‌but‌ ‌what‌ ‌kept‌ ‌her‌ ‌going‌ ‌was‌ ‌believing‌ ‌that‌ ‌if‌ ‌she‌ ‌could‌ ‌
climb‌ ‌this‌ ‌mountain‌ ‌she‌ ‌could‌ ‌do‌ ‌anything‌ ‌to‌ ‌help‌ ‌people‌ ‌and‌ ‌help‌ ‌herself‌ ‌
in‌ ‌doing‌ ‌things.She‌ ‌was‌ ‌only‌ ‌half‌ ‌was‌ ‌when‌ ‌she‌ ‌stopped‌ ‌and‌ ‌thought‌ ‌of‌ ‌
the‌ ‌consequences‌ ‌if‌ ‌she‌ ‌had‌ ‌lose‌ ‌her‌ ‌grip‌ ‌and‌ ‌fell‌ ‌of.‌ ‌Would‌ ‌I‌ ‌survive‌ ‌?‌ ‌
Would‌ ‌I‌ ‌be‌ ‌scared‌ ‌for‌ ‌the‌ ‌rest‌ ‌of‌ ‌my‌ ‌life‌ ‌from‌ ‌this‌ ‌memory‌ ‌or‌ ‌would‌ ‌this‌ ‌ ‌
trip‌ ‌remind‌ ‌me‌ ‌of‌ ‌the‌ ‌breathtaking‌ ‌view‌ ‌that‌ ‌made‌ ‌me‌ ‌happy.‌ ‌
Lara‌ ‌chose‌ ‌to‌ ‌think‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌trip‌ ‌that‌ ‌reminded‌ ‌her‌ ‌of‌ ‌the‌ ‌
breathtaking‌ ‌view.‌ 

‌She‌ ‌was‌ ‌almost‌ ‌their‌ ‌when‌ ‌she‌ ‌was‌ ‌so‌ ‌tired‌ ‌she‌ ‌
nearly‌ ‌lost‌ ‌her‌ ‌grip‌ ‌and‌ ‌fell‌ ‌yet‌ ‌she‌ ‌pulled‌ ‌all‌ ‌her‌ ‌strength‌ ‌together‌ ‌
and‌ ‌she‌ ‌made‌ ‌it‌ ‌to‌ ‌the‌ ‌top.She‌ ‌was‌ ‌determined‌ ‌to‌ ‌make‌ ‌to‌ ‌the‌ ‌top‌ ‌and‌ ‌
she‌ ‌did.‌ ‌She‌ ‌looked‌ ‌at‌ ‌all‌ ‌the‌ ‌colour‌ ‌in‌ ‌the‌ ‌sky‌ ‌that‌ ‌blended‌ ‌and‌ ‌
remember‌ ‌what‌ ‌her‌ ‌dad‌ ‌always‌ ‌said‌ ‌to‌ ‌her‌ ‌“‌ ‌never‌ ‌finish‌ ‌half‌ ‌way‌ ‌in‌ ‌the‌ ‌
race‌ ‌until‌ ‌you‌ ‌complete‌ ‌it.”The‌ ‌scenery‌ ‌was‌ ‌so‌ ‌beautiful‌ ‌that‌ ‌she‌ ‌would‌ ‌

never‌ ‌forget‌ ‌this‌ ‌day‌ ‌onwards.‌ ‌

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