LI: Use 6 sentence storyto set the structure of a narrative.
To help us put our learning this week together we were asked to write a 6 sentence story. This story will be used as the text in our manga comic DLO. Our storys were about an anime charater of our choice. I chose Amira, she is the charater I have made up and drawn for my other activities. This story is about her walking in an alley way and then fights someone in the same alleyway as her. I found this task very fun because I had used my imagination to tell people the story of Amira and what happened in the alley.
Hi Afatia
ReplyDeleteI was immediately hooked into your story as you set the scene and her surroundings as dead and empty. I really liked how you used descriptive words to paint a picture in my head of her emotions and actions.
Great work
Hello Afatia!
ReplyDeleteCool post, I liked how much descriptive words you put into this story. This story actually reminded me of when I was doing a writing test at school because a lot of those words you used were used in my story. Although there were a few spelling mistakes I noticed, maybe you could fix them?