LI: To create a text graphic to share our lyrics and the chorus of the song.
Today, for my eighth Kick Start Summer Learning Task, I wrote a poem which is called "we will rise" by the students in Mangarere College. My lyrics is about how high we could reach f we were to put the time and effort into the things we love doing. This task was really fun for me because I got to make my own lyrics from being inspired by the mangarere students and maybe somehow one day will inspire someone who is on my blog.
Talofa lava Afatia,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on completing your eighth task of the Summer Learning Journey! I liked that you were an active blogger and always added quality posts on your blog. In this blog post the thing I like the most is that you have used new vocabulary which makes your poem effective. I also liked how you have used "repetition" because it makes the poem more powerful and makes it easy for the message to be conveyed. What did you find challenging in this activity?
Great job and keep it up!
-Sakshi
Kia ora Afatia,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
“We Will Rise” is such an empowering and motivational song! Ka pai on a fantastic job! I also like how you’ve chosen a rising sun as the background image to your picture. What a fabulous idea! I also love your use of repetition!
What other sorts of songs do you write about? How did you think of the words? Do you like singing?
I see you’ve included a video of you singing your song! I can’t wait to hear it!
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)